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First Date:

Can you hear the melody
The birds are chirping
This must be a sign
Are you a dime

I must say you just
brighten up my day

Is this LOVE OR LUST
An Infatuation or a Crush
I don’t know
But the first date’s over

Are we taking this slow
Are we rocking the boat
Are you a sign
Because you’re a dime

I must say you just
Brighten up my day

Is this LOVE OR LUST
An Infatuation or a Crush
I don’t know
But the first date’s over

We got so much potential
What question lie ahead
All I know is I can’t wait
For a second Date

Is this LOVE OR LUST
An Infatuation or a Crush
I don’t know
But the first date’s over
Yeah yeah yeah
The first date’s over
Yeah yeah yeah
The first date’s over

By Melody Ann

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